BAMComix Presents - Hidden in the Shadows - Book II - Chapter 8 - Black Night for the Black Knights - PT01

BAMComix presents - Black night for the Black  Knights - PT01 (1) by Dal Lee, on Flickr
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Now, this is escalating quickly!

ZeroDelta wrote:

Now, this is escalating quickly!

Indeed! Then again, the 'Master' did demand action to be taken .

Tick-Tock escaped again? I agree with Jenna: the Black Knights really need to address base security! Or, more accurately, maybe start by implementing some sort of security, as there seems to be pretty much zero at this point.

The "security camera" footage looks really cool! What apps did you use to create that effect?

FIELD STATION 42 wrote:

Tick-Tock escaped again? I agree with Jenna: the Black Knights really need to address base security! Or, more accurately, maybe start by implementing some sort of security, as there seems to be pretty much zero at this point.

The "security camera" footage looks really cool! What apps did you use to create that effect?

Escaped or aided is the question?

I used befunky to create the security footage, its a free onlne photo editor. The whole thing was created using the free options .
https://www.befunky.com/create/

BAMComix wrote:

I used befunky to create the security footage, its a free onlne photo editor. The whole thing was created using the free options .
https://www.befunky.com/create/

Oh, neat! Thanx for the link! The results look very convincing!

Wait, where there not more replies to this? I could have sworn I replied to Dave´s post. ((I should have reduced the image I posted in size, it was too big, that was my bad, sorry))

ZeroDelta wrote:

Wait, where there not more replies to this? I could have sworn I replied to Dave´s post. ((I should have reduced the image I posted in size, it was too big, that was my bad, sorry))

I removed the replies as they were, in my opinion, irrelevant to the chapter featured here. The size of the picture wasn't the issue. I would like to point this out though, if you do not allow a chapter or story to flow. For people to make human mistakes, and for bad guys to operate in the shadows and cause havoc, without consequences, you have no story.
Constructive criticism is great, and I will always welcome that. However, fixating on one issue instead of allowing the story to progress and unfold is unhelpful.

BAMComix wrote:

ZeroDelta wrote:

Wait, where there not more replies to this? I could have sworn I replied to Dave´s post. ((I should have reduced the image I posted in size, it was too big, that was my bad, sorry))

I removed the replies as they were, in my opinion, irrelevant to the chapter featured here. The size of the picture wasn't the issue. I would like to point this out though, if you do not allow a chapter or story to flow. For people to make human mistakes, and for bad guys to operate in the shadows and cause havoc, without consequences, you have no story.
Constructive criticism is great, and I will always welcome that. However, fixating on one issue instead of allowing the story to progress and unfold is unhelpful.

I understand. Let me be constructive then in my criticism: I think that the conflict is always good and that your story is great so far, I know that you added the security issues so you could get the plot moving along. In my opinion, the reason for that should be revealed to be someone that is indeed close to Jake and who did it under duress, like they are threatening his family and friends, so he had no choice to go along, playing the long game, in the hopes that he/she could then get the jump on the bad guys. It would add tension and drama, not to mention that the mystery of who it could be would keep the readers enthralled.

Just my two cents.

ZeroDelta wrote:

BAMComix wrote:

ZeroDelta wrote:

Wait, where there not more replies to this? I could have sworn I replied to Dave´s post. ((I should have reduced the image I posted in size, it was too big, that was my bad, sorry))

I removed the replies as they were, in my opinion, irrelevant to the chapter featured here. The size of the picture wasn't the issue. I would like to point this out though, if you do not allow a chapter or story to flow. For people to make human mistakes, and for bad guys to operate in the shadows and cause havoc, without consequences, you have no story.
Constructive criticism is great, and I will always welcome that. However, fixating on one issue instead of allowing the story to progress and unfold is unhelpful.

I understand. Let me be constructive then in my criticism: I think that the conflict is always good and that your story is great so far, I know that you added the security issues so you could get the plot moving along. In my opinion, the reason for that should be revealed to be someone that is indeed close to Jake and who did it under duress, like they are threatening his family and friends, so he had no choice to go along, playing the long game, in the hopes that he/she could then get the jump on the bad guys. It would add tension and drama, not to mention that the mystery of who it could be would keep the readers enthralled.

Just my two cents.

Thanks Zero! I do really appreciate the time, effort and interest you invest into the ongoing adventures of the Black Knights, and the shadows saga, and like Dave, I love how invested you guys get into the story chapters .
Now. the duress, a great angle zero! and one I must admit, I hadn't thought of .