Thought I'd have a crack at this comic thing

My first attempt is nice and short :

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But I think I might have got carried away with the second one. Too long do you think?

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Harry McTavish your first attempts of doing comic stores are OUTSTANDING mate, the first one is nice and short and made me smile and laugh, the mini shopping trolley is just so cute and the perfect size for a Action Man  . Your second one is outstanding, outstanding scenery, outstanding location and outstanding photography. I think you can never get carried away or to long with a comic story.

Harry McTavish keep up the Comic strips please, very much looking foreword to seeing more  .

Great comics Harry! Poor Bert! I'm thinking of doing a comic myself but I need to do some sewing first to make some special outfits.

Awesome stuff Ray !! fantastic comic strips !! I really enjoyed them, especially the humour  

I don't believe Bert has passed away, I reckon he was swallws whole and is slowly working his way out from the inside !!, unfortunately for Bert I believe his only way of escape is out the back door so to speak !!!

     

Awesome stuff mate, lets see more  

   Great locations, great figures, great script!    


If the ideas are this good then the comics can never be tooooooo long!


  'I've got a good feeling about this!' not just the irony in the story, but also because we are watching the Star Wars movies with the kids at the moment, and every 15mins someone seems to say 'I've got a bad feeling about this!' I digress...

Excellent work!

Thats your first go:shock: . No way, that is brilliant. The first one is so good, you actually took the guys out in public to the supermarket. Bloody Brilliant
And the second one is a great story and fantastic photos.
Well done Harry, you have set the bar high for yourself now for the next one.

Thanks for your lovely comments.Rick, bangers and mash is an English classic....sausages and mash potatoes although I think it's has to be a certain type of sausage. 

VERY GOOD     

Fantastic start!