The Adventure Begins For Indiana Fritz and the Chest of Life,

Fantastic story, Mark!!!

Top work!!!

Good ol' Jacob! he manages to save the day!

Blondeactionman wrote:

Good ol' Jacob! he manages to save the day!

Yeah, Jacob is a great character Mark!

gibri wrote:

Fantastic story, Mark!!!

Top work!!!

Many thanks Brian glad you are enjoying it

Indiana Fritz looks back to see the damage, after the loud explosion    



Old Jacob looks up to see if young Fritz made it out in time  



Jacob and Indiana Fritz brush themselves off and look amazed at what they see     they notice Kano and Vamrush are buried under the large rocks, Dea'thvam covered in rubble




Jacob tells fritz now you're chance go in and get the chest.................

Old Jacob rushes over to help Indiana Fritz out with the chest,



Fritz climbs out suddenly they hear a voice, they turn to see Mr. White..........





Well done gentlemen I did have my doubts but you've proven me wrong I like that.......







I think this belongs to you Fritz...... And I'll take the chest if you don't mind.......









What's in the the chest, never you mind that, but all I'll say is it could be very very dangerous in the hands of Kano bosses.
We're let the sand cover them up in years to come,........      


Fritz put his arm round old Jacob to thank him....



They turn to say bye to Mr White............. But his gone............ As if the sand swallowed him up......

Excellent stuff Wolfie! and great to see Indiana fritz emerge triumphant! Its a good job ol' Jackb was on hand tp help . Looking forward to his next exciting adventure!

Epilogue

Back at the devastating explosion site by the great temple, dust has settle no sound at tall,


Sudden there's movement under the great rocks the dust and rubble seem to move.......


A hand suddenly pushes through the dust and rubble a bolder is pushed to the side......



Kano spits and coughs the dust from his face and the look of anger evil anger........    

With his almighty strength Kano starts to move the great rock from him.......

Kano removes the second great rock from himself......





Helps Vamrush who's still alive."........









He turn and helps Dea'thvam who has survived as well.......






Both Dea'thvam and Vamrush still coughing dust " says there missed the chance to get even with fritz"

But Kano knows............        






OH There WILL BE A NEXT TIME........




The End.................

 Brilliant , that's a great ending . Glad to see they survived to cause lots more problems in the future

Many thanks Richard glad you enjoyed it, next adventure coming soon,

Great story and great conclusion. Looking forward to more. I definitely liked the way you managed to tell a complete story and create characters, intrigue and plant the seeds for further adventures! Great work!

AdventureTeamHQ.com wrote:

Great story and great conclusion. Looking forward to more. I definitely liked the way you managed to tell a complete story and create characters, intrigue and plant the seeds for further adventures! Great work!

Many thanks for you're kind comments very much appreciated... Stay tuned for Indiana Fritz's next adventure

great stuff wolfie !

Captian action wrote:

great stuff wolfie !

Many thanks Jay, glad you enjoyed it

Reddragon wrote:

 Brilliant , that's a great ending . Glad to see they survived to cause lots more problems in the future

Many thanks Richard my friend, look out for further adventures

I got my eye's peeled bring on the action

Fantastic shots! BOOM!

Fantastic story Sir Mark! And good to see the villains survived to cause more mayhem.

Beatlefan wrote:

Fantastic story Sir Mark! And good to see the villains survived to cause more mayhem.

Many thanks Sir Richard glad you enjoyed it

Kano the master Villian is going to get nastier

JohnnyE4 wrote:

I got my eye's peeled  bring on the action

Many thanks Johnny, keep those eagle eyes moving so you don't miss the next instalment

inntruderr61 wrote:

Fantastic shots! BOOM!

Many thanks Jim there's going to be a bigger Boom next time

WOW outstanding story, I bet Old Jacob and Indiana Fritz jumped out their skin when they suddenly heard Mr White voice behind them , mmmmmm I wonder why Mr White is taking the chest off them and why won't he tell Indiana and Old Jacob What's in the the chest. I wonder why the chest could be very very dangerous in the hands of Kano bosses, I bloody hope we find out in the end lol. I really don't trust Mr White one bit sorry, he's so..... mysterious and the way he just appears out of the blue says what he wants then disappears suddenly when you turn your back. Kano wow he's got almighty strength, I'm really liking all the pictures of Kano removing all the rocks and helping out Vamrush and Dea'thvam out of the rocks the dust and rubble. What does Kano know and why is he so sure that he thinks that There WILL BE A NEXT TIME. I'm really really looking forward to seeing the next part.

ACKIE88 wrote:

WOW outstanding story, I bet Old Jacob and Indiana Fritz jumped out their skin when they suddenly heard Mr White voice behind them , mmmmmm I wonder why Mr White is taking the chest off them and why won't he tell Indiana and Old Jacob What's in the the chest. I wonder why the chest could be very very dangerous in the hands of Kano bosses, I bloody hope we find out in the end lol. I really don't trust Mr White one bit sorry, he's so..... mysterious and the way he just appears out of the blue says what he wants then disappears suddenly when you turn your back. Kano wow he's got almighty strength, I'm really liking all the pictures of Kano removing all the rocks and helping out Vamrush and  Dea'thvam out of the rocks the dust and rubble. What does Kano know and why is he so sure that he thinks that There WILL BE A NEXT TIME. I'm really really looking forward to seeing the next part.

Many thanks Alex my friend..... For your kind comments, there be another adventure for Indiana Fritz and old Jacob