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Great Story and pics as usual Dal .

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Good stuff as always.
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So Carlos feels out gunned by Danni...Who can blame him?? Shocked Shocked

lol!

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Intriguing stuff !!! What will happen next ???

Next installment asap please Dal !!! Well done. cheers cheers

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Really enjoyed your pics and story Dal... cheers

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Chip wrote:
Great Story and pics as usual Dal .

bounce bounce bounce Cheers Chip! more to come soon Very Happy

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Kimono Troop Command wrote:
Good stuff as always.  

Thanks Gary! really pleased you enjoyed it bounce bounce

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somekindajoe wrote:
So Carlos feels out gunned by Danni...Who can blame him?? Shocked Shocked

lol!

Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy Isn't everything bigger in Texas? lol! lol! lol!

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Dreadnought wrote:
Intriguing stuff !!! What will happen next ???

Next installment asap please Dal !!! Well done. cheers cheers

Thanks Kev! really pleased your enjoying the story so far, lots more to come yet! cheers cheers

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inntruderr61 wrote:
Really enjoyed your pics and story Dal... cheers

Many thanks Jim! bounce bounce bounce

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Great story Dal, really enjoying it!

Great photos and character development.

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gibri wrote:
Great story Dal, really enjoying it!

Great photos and character development.

cheers bounce cheers

Many thanks Bri! more to follow soon


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Leaving the Jeep behind and heading in to the depths of Dinosaur Valley on foot! Exciting cover image!

Ha! Little does Dannii know that Jake may have really put his foot in it this time by turning Redbox in to an immortal, indestructible demon!

I like the carry-over from the previous installment showing us that Carlos is still spooked by the encounter with the demon woman. He's not too thrilled about the dinosaurs, either!

Even better sequence of "movement photos" than usual during the initial scenes in Dinosaur Valley.

I see a reference to the "shooting" during the final moments before the explosion in the underground lab. I appreciate these little back-references to tie up loose ends.

I'm also pleased to see that Dannii is cautioning Carlos, multiple times, about keeping a cool head.

P.58 is practically a pin-up calendar grade photo! Good stuff!

Love that wide-angle pic at the top of P.61! That took some time and effort to set up! Nice work! Great pic! And an even better pic on P. 62, with the overgrown ruins! You've outdone yourself with the sets in this sequence. Epic stuff!

Hollow Earth theories! Oh yeah!

Oooooh... good question! How was this place discovered?

And even bigger question: who does Jake answer to?

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Leaving the Jeep behind and heading in to the depths of Dinosaur Valley on foot! Exciting cover image!

Ha! Little does Dannii know that Jake may have really put his foot in it this time by turning Redbox in to an immortal, indestructible demon!

I like the carry-over from the previous installment showing us that Carlos is still spooked by the encounter with the demon woman. He's not too thrilled about the dinosaurs, either!

Even better sequence of "movement photos" than usual during the initial scenes in Dinosaur Valley.

I see a reference to the "shooting" during the final moments before the explosion in the underground lab. I appreciate these little back-references to tie up loose ends.

I'm also pleased to see that Dannii is cautioning Carlos, multiple times, about keeping a cool head.

P.58 is practically a pin-up calendar grade photo! Good stuff!

Love that wide-angle pic at the top of P.61! That took some time and effort to set up! Nice work! Great pic! And an even better pic on P. 62, with the overgrown ruins! You've outdone yourself with the sets in this sequence. Epic stuff!

Hollow Earth theories! Oh yeah!

Oooooh... good question! How was this place discovered?

And even bigger question: who does Jake answer to?

Yeah! on foot from here on out. No protection of the vehicle anymore. Indeed! will Jake tell anyone? time will tell I guess Very Happy .

In this story I really wanted to explore the characters in a lot more detail, try and convey their personalities a bit more. As you know Dave, I like to pop in small details from previous chapters to help the story roll on, plus it also gives an opportunity to know whats going on if they hadn't read the previous chapters Wink .
Again, I wanted to try and give a sense of urgency to what they are doing, trying to hurry, while also expressing caution to their surroundings.
Again, I get to develop Dannii's character here, she is the most experienced not only out of these two where the Valley is concerned, but also all the all other agents. She is an easy going kind of girl, but when seriousness is required, she will air her opinions.
Really pleased you liked the shot here, I needed her to have her jacket back on, and it took some positioning to make her natural.
As you know, I love building the dino valley sets, pleased you liked the pics here.
I wondered if anyone would pick up on the three queries here, three questions that I will try and answer over time. I should imagine the burning one is who does Jake answer too??? Suspect Suspect

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A great story that is keeping us reading and excited for the next chapter, but its the pictures that I love. Its a real masterclass in using tight shots to create excitement and use the scenery to its best advantage. As ever every scene is lit beautifully and packed with interesting details.

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... but its the pictures that I love. Its a real masterclass in using tight shots to create excitement and use the scenery to its best advantage.

Yes, this! You have stated what I was trying to express much more succinctly and accurately.

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... but its the pictures that I love. Its a real masterclass in using tight shots to create excitement and use the scenery to its best advantage.

Yes, this! You have stated what I was trying to express much more succinctly and accurately.

Many thanks Chris and Dave! bounce bounce I am so pleased that you guys enjoy the stories and pics,, it really makes it all worthwhile cheers cheers cheers cheers

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Yes I do to want to know how Dinosaur Valley was found and who found it first. Really enjoyed reading chapter four. I really liked the little details of Dannii that she told.

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