BAMCOMIX Presents - Hidden In The Shadows - Chapter Twenty-Two - Facts and Friction

Far from boring Dave. This was excellent. Tense, edgy at times, intriguing. It was worth the read.

Kimono Troop Command wrote:

Far from boring Dave.  This was excellent.  Tense, edgy at times, intriguing.  It was worth the read.  

Thank you. You are generous in your remarks. I am glad you found this installment interesting.
I'm particularly pleased that "tense" came through.

Kimono Troop Command wrote:

Far from boring Dave.  This was excellent.  Tense, edgy at times, intriguing.  It was worth the read.  

I agree with Gary! That was an excellent installment Dave! Where has miss Fields gone??, has she really left the RKS? In fairness Victor did rather push his luck banging on about Lady Pollyanna! Gotta say, I loved Victor pompous attitude! 
So, Miss Biscayne will be joining them too/, very interesting.., Really looking forward to the next installment Dave!

I enjoyed that Dave , I found Victor humorous , such phrases as Poppycock ect , I not heard in such a long time , it made it easy in my mind to hear what he would sound like too . I don`t blame Miss Fields telling him where to stick it , I was keen to read each next page , think this was your best chapter thus far . Well done .

Dashed good read, Dave! I agree with what Chip said that I can hear Champion's voice in my head. Great flow to the story, great plot and dialogue, a real page turner.

I also love the perpetual smirk on Louis' face.   Used to great effect.

Very well done!!!

I'm looking forward to future installments.

Miss Fields? What, quit! No!

You are gonna have to bring her back somehow Dave... Or send her to another team perhaps...

Great episode, and I loved how you bought in the other teams' activities, of course, especially Spy Camp, LOL.

I really enjoyed reading Chapter Twenty-Two - Facts and Friction. It was really good of Mr Champion to remind us the other teams on goings.

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

I really enjoyed reading Chapter Twenty-Two - Facts and Friction. It was really good of Mr Champion to remind us the other teams on goings.

Thank you for taking the time to read through the chapter!

I say, Spiffing work indeed Dave. I salute you Sir. I am riveted and eagerly awaiting the next Chapter...

SixthShooter wrote:

I say, Spiffing work indeed Dave. I salute you Sir. I am riveted and eagerly awaiting the next Chapter...

You are most gracious, good sir!

(And thanks for the nudge! I'm going to start photographing the next installment right now!)