valentine evil part 6

The Council of Doom Members are all sitting enjoying the feeling that they all now deleted from the Police Data Base.



SUDDENLY a Swat Team including Action Man's Robotic Dog, come bursting into the room shouting,  "Police, Police.  Stay exactly where you are. Do not move."



The Robotic Dog is very near to Action Man and  recognises him immediately.  Action Man doesn't acknowledge the presence of the dog.  



The dog makes a sound and Action Man turns around to see what, or who, has made the noise. Alas, Action Man is still under the influence of Dr. X's Mind Control Chip.  The dog does a quick scan of Action Man and he notices that Action Man's  readings aren't quite right. There is something amiss!  He finds the problem very quickly and luckily is able to disable the Mind Control Chip immediately.



Action Man gets up very quickly and rips off the Mind Control Chip and says, "Robotic Dog, set your missile on Gangrene and Tempest." Gangrene and Tempest immediately put their arms up in the air.  " ALL the rest of you Council of Doom Members, put your hands up right now."



Action Man thinks to himself, " I don't know how I got here; what I'm doing here and why am I wearing one of Dr.X's old disgusting jumpsuits???  Although, once  they are all back in Jail, I'll get answers from Dr.X, if it's the last thing that I do."

Well done to Action Man's robo-mutt! I wonder if action man will have any memories of what went on???

Blondeactionman wrote:

Well done to Action Man's robo-mutt! I wonder if action man will have any memories of what went on???

Yes I totally agree with you Dal on well done to Man's robo-mutt, I think Action Man should give that dog a screw nut for being a good Robotic Dog for rescuing him from staying as Dr.X mind controlled goon . No action man will not have any memories of what went on, that's why he'll be visiting Dr.X in jail and asking him what went on.

Great stuff Alex!

inntruderr61 wrote:

Great stuff Alex!

Thanks inntruderr61 .

robo dog saves the day

Nice one Ackie

Rogue-Trooper wrote:

 robo dog saves the day

Nice one Ackie

Thanks for your comments RT.

Very good Ackie, a nice clean ending too, imagine one of those dogs sinking it's teeth into you: OUCH!

clivvers wrote:

Very good Ackie, a nice clean ending too, imagine one of those dogs sinking it's teeth into you: OUCH!

Awwwww thank you very much for the comments my swapping buddy .

a great ending to a great comic very well done ACKIE

Acam24-7 wrote:

a great ending to a great comic very well done ACKIE

Thanks for the great comments Acam24-7, very much appreciated .

I’ve really really enjoyed rereading all SIX PARTS of valentine evil. I remember I got the idea for this story from a Kim Possible episode called The Twin Factor.

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

I’ve really really enjoyed rereading all SIX PARTS of valentine evil. I remember I got the idea for this story from a Kim Possible episode called The Twin Factor.

Cool stuff Alex!

Another really enjoyable sequence Alex!
That purple jumpsuit had me worried all along!
Don't know which I'd fear the most, Professor Gangrene's Mind Chip or Dr Evil's Mind Control Machine.

Maybe my own Dr Evil story needs a robotic dog like yours, as the one the policemen has over there seems to be virtually useless!
Keep 'em coming!

LeStryge wrote:

Another really enjoyable sequence Alex!
That purple jumpsuit had me worried all along!
Don't know which I'd fear the most, Professor Gangrene's Mind Chip or Dr Evil's Mind Control Machine.

Maybe my own Dr Evil story needs a robotic dog like yours, as the one the policemen has over there seems to be virtually useless!
Keep 'em coming!  

LeStryge I’m glad that you you thought it was a enjoyable end of Valentine Evil. Professor Gangrene's Mind Chip could have been made up in hundreds were Dr Evil has only got one Mind Control Machine. The robotic dog actually belongs to AM, I just made it that Action Man’s robotic dog joined up with the swat team since his handler wasn’t available at the time.

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

Professor Gangrene's Mind Chip could have been made up in hundreds were Dr Evil has only got one Mind Control Machine.

Perfectly true Alex,.....which makes Professor Gangrene more to be feared!

LeStryge wrote:

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

Professor Gangrene's Mind Chip could have been made up in hundreds were Dr Evil has only got one Mind Control Machine.

Perfectly true Alex,.....which makes Professor Gangrene more to be feared!

But I could also see Professor Gangrene and Dr Evil working together. Two evil minds working together is very worrying thought.

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

But I could also see Professor Gangrene and Dr Evil working together. Two evil minds working together is very worrying thought.

Don't forget that Dr Evil has in fact THREE minds of his own!
If he was to team up with Professor Gangrene that would amount to FOUR evil brains at work!
That is a VERY daunting thought.

LeStryge wrote:

Prof Gangrene Fan wrote:

But I could also see Professor Gangrene and Dr Evil working together. Two evil minds working together is very worrying thought.

Don't forget that Dr Evil has in fact THREE minds of his own!
If he was to team up with Professor Gangrene that would amount to FOUR evil brains at work!
That is a VERY daunting thought.

Well let’s hope that the both of them never team up then hu

I’ve reread part 6 of valentine evil and I really enjoyed reading it again. I want to share this again for our members who haven’t read this before.

Thank you for bumping it up Alexander! I really enjoyed reading this story.

Daryl

TNshooter wrote:

Thank you for bumping it up Alexander! I really enjoyed reading this story.

Daryl

That’s no problem . I’m really pleased that you really enjoyed reading each chapter of this story.