A Treasure Hunters Kill part 2.

No Face quickly raises his gun and says,  “So…….your Demetrius!”  Demetrius replies,   “Yes, I’m Demetrius and why the hell are you in my warehouse?  More importantly, why are you aiming a silencer gun at me?”



“I’m in your warehouse because I was looking for you.   Luckily for me you have turned up and I’m aiming my silencer gun at you because I’m here to kill you.  You see, I was ordered to do so by Carl Foster.”  No Face goes on to explains the reasons why Carl Foster wants him dead.




“Wait…… How about this No Face. I pay you more than Jonathan was not to kill me and instead to kill Jonathan since he ordered a hit on me it’s only far. What do you say No Face ?



No Face puts his gun down and says,  “Deal”.



Demetrius walks off to fetch the money.




Demetrius hands over a large envelope  to No Face containing  the money. No Face takes it from him.



No Face walks out the room.

Well... Demetrius the Treasure Hunter is certainly a fearless sort! The ugly dude with a big gun aimed at his head doesn't faze him in the least! Instead, he's all challenging, like, "Who the *blank* are you and why are you pointing a gun at me?"

Apparently Demetrius makes some serious dosh in the treasure stealing hunting biz. "How about if I pay you more?"

I was thinking it was a waste of time for No Face to go blah-blah-blahing to his target about the reasons behind the hit, but it actually paid off! No Face gets paid twice, and paid more!

At this point, No Face could actually pocket the money and skip out without killing anyone. I wonder if he will go back and take out Foster?

Of course, now Demetrius knows who ordered the hit on him, so he will be following up to make sure Foster is taken out.

This could end simply, or it could become more complicated, now that No Face is open to taking "bids" on his services. The highest bid winds, low bidder loses... big time!

SCU_HQ wrote:

Well... Demetrius the Treasure Hunter is certainly a fearless sort! The ugly dude with a big gun aimed at his head doesn't faze him in the least! Instead, he's all challenging, like, "Who the *blank* are you and why are you pointing a gun at me?"

Apparently Demetrius makes some serious dosh in the treasure stealing hunting biz. "How about if I pay you more?"

I was thinking it was a waste of time for No Face to go blah-blah-blahing to his target about the reasons behind the hit, but it actually paid off! No Face gets paid twice, and paid more!

At this point, No Face could actually pocket the money and skip out without killing anyone. I wonder if he will go back and take out Foster?

Of course, now Demetrius knows who ordered the hit on him, so he will be following up to make sure Foster is taken out.

This could end simply, or it could become more complicated, now that No Face is open to taking "bids" on his services. The highest bid winds, low bidder loses... big time!

Thank you very much for your deep thinking on this chapter.

That didn`t go how I anticipated ! He looks a bit of a dude Demetrius . with the greaser hair style and ear ring . If I was no face I would collect the money off Carl Foster , telling him the job was done and double up for no work .

Chip wrote:

That didn`t go how I anticipated ! He looks a bit of a dude Demetrius . with the greaser hair style and ear ring . If I was no face I would collect the money off  Carl Foster , telling him the job was done and double up for no work .

Thank you very much Chip for your comments.

I'm surprised No Face didn't shoot him after getting the money, then go and get Foster.
He would have the money from both and no one to sell him out as an assassin.

TNshooter wrote:

I'm surprised No Face didn't shoot him after getting the money, then go and get Foster.
He would have the money from both and no one to sell him out as an assassin.  

I’m really liking your thinking Daryl.

TNshooter wrote:

I'm surprised No Face didn't shoot him after getting the money, then go and get Foster.
He would have the money from both and no one to sell him out as an assassin.  

That would have been the best plan, I agree!

TNshooter wrote:

I'm surprised No Face didn't shoot him after getting the money, then go and get Foster.
He would have the money from both and no one to sell him out as an assassin.

That's EXACTLY what I was thinking.
Demetrius should have pulled a gun while he was pretending to get the money and shot No-Face!

LeStryge wrote:

TNshooter wrote:

I'm surprised No Face didn't shoot him after getting the money, then go and get Foster.
He would have the money from both and no one to sell him out as an assassin.

That's EXACTLY what I was thinking.
Demetrius should have pulled a gun while he was pretending to get the money and shot No-Face!

Thanks for your comments LeStryge. I don’t think Demetrius is hiding a gun on his person to pull on No Face.

What? No gun at all in any of the multi pockets on that utility vest he's wearing?

LeStryge wrote:

What? No gun at all in any of the multi pockets on that utility vest he's wearing?

Nope

Message for members who thought No Face should have just shot Demetrius straight after he got handed the large envelope of money my reply is that No Face wanted to keep Demetrius on side because he might give No Face more hitman jobs in the future  .

So No-Face has an eye to the future eh?

LeStryge wrote:

So No-Face has an eye to the future eh?

He sure does.

A very intriguing installment Alex .

Blondeactionman wrote:

A very intriguing installment Alex .

Thank you very much Dal for the comment.

I think No face greed took over...Buy yes I agree he should of gave
Demetrius a third eye...
Cool shots Alex!

inntruderr61 wrote:

I think No face greed took over...Buy yes I agree he should of gave
Demetrius a third eye...
Cool shots Alex!

Thank you very much for your comments Jim.